Особенности Royale Roulette 21.09.2020

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На этой странице вы видите все отзывы, которые получила работа. Оставить свой отзыв вы можете под текстом каждой конкретной части.

Что я могу сказать на счет работы.

Задумка оочень интересная, я думала, что будет похуже, но нет, это даже интересно читать. Персонаж, слава богу я еще не увидела в нем сьюшности.
Но в каждой бочке меда найдется ложка дегтя.
Работа безграмотная. Я прочитала всего 3-4 абзаца и нашла около 6 ошибок, как орфографических, так и пунктуационных. И это режет глаза.
Так же очень много тавтологии. Я уже который раз замечаю ваше любимое «афера», хотя правильнне писать «оферта». И это слово имеет немного другое значение. Камон, есть куча синонимов! Проказы, баловство, проступки, деяния, шалости, хулиганство и т.п
Что могу посоветовать.
Использовать черт возьми волшебную кнопку в конце редактора главы «проверить на наличие ошибок» (очень многие брезгуют, видимо, нажимать туда), форматирова текст (для этого так же специальная кнопочка, не лениться и читать текст, так как в нем полно глупых ошибок по типу неправильного окончания или недописанного слова. Да, я прекрасно понимаю, что часто авторы увереры в том, что главу перечитывать необязательно, но вам стоило бы, потому что таких ошибок не мало. И наконец делить на абзацы (красные строки, мелочь, а приятно)
А для того, что бы было в 2 раза легче советую писать главы в ворде, а потом копировать их и редактировать. Ворд можно и на телефон скачать, довольно удобно.
Несмотря на эти ошибки, работа остается хорошей, но все равно глаза режет

Вдохновения вам, автор

ААААААААААААААА. Сижу рыдаю! Это невероятно! Я просто в восторге! Автор, люблю тебя! Только подправь текст, я понимаю, что могут быть опечатки, но такое кол-во режет глаз.

Roulette-Royale

There is no real casino out there that doesn’t have a option in store for its customers. It’s basically the most famous game you can try in a casino and well worth the thrill it offers. Other than real casinos, online casinos also offer a wide variety of various variations of the roulette for the online gambler. This particular one, the online one, is called Roulette-Royale and it basically differs a little bit. The Roulette Royale is basically another version of the online European Roulette. It is played with a single-zero roulette wheel for increased odds of winning at the table. As a player you may make all of the classic – regular – bets you are used to like inside bets for bigger payouts, outside bets for more frequent winnings or multiple bets as part of your roulette strategy. The actual payouts for your bets are practically kind of the same as in a standard game of European Roulette and go from 1 to 1 for a red or black bet up to 35 to 1 for a single number straight-up bet.

Deltin Royale — Tariff

Weekend (Friday, Saturday, Sunday)
Stag: Rs. 4,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 2,500 with 1,500 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 6,500 with 4,500 OTPC

Weekend (Friday, Saturday, Sunday)
Stag: Rs. 4,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 2,500 with 1,500 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 6,500 with 4,500 OTPC

Thank God Its Tuesday (Valid on Tuesdays only)
Stag: Rs. 3,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 2,000 with 2,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 5,000 with 5,000 OTPC

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REGULAR PACKAGE

Weekdays (Monday, Wednesday, Thursdays)

Stag: Rs. 3,000 with 2,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 2,000 with 1,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 5,000 with 3,000 OTPC

Weekend (Friday, Saturday, Sunday)

Stag: Rs. 4,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 2,500 with 1,500 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 6,500 with 4,500 OTPC

Thank God Its Tuesday (Valid on Tuesdays only)

Stag: Rs. 3,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 2,000 with 2,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 5,000 with 5,000 OTPC

th February 2020

Weekday Package (Monday to Thursday)
Rs 3500 per adult with 2500 OTPC. (Age: 21+)

Weekend Package (Friday to Sunday)
Rs 4500 per adult with 3500 OTPC. (Age: 21+)

Inclusions:
Multi-cuisine buffet dinner | Unlimited house brand drinks (alcoholic and non-alcoholic) | Live entertainment | Taxes | T&C apply*

Call : +91 98196 98196

Weekend (Friday, Saturday, Sunday)
Stag: Rs. 5,000 with 4,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 4,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 9,000 with 7,000 OTPC

Thank God Its Tuesday (Valid on Tuesdays only)
Stag: Rs. 4,000 with 4,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 3,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 7,000 with 7,000 OTPC

PREMIUM PACKAGE

Weekdays (Monday, Wednesday, Thursdays)

Stag: Rs. 4,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 3,000 with 2,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 7,000 with 5,000 OTPC

Weekend (Friday, Saturday, Sunday)

Stag: Rs. 5,000 with 4,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 4,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 9,000 with 7,000 OTPC

Thank God Its Tuesday (Valid on Tuesdays only)

Stag: Rs. 4,000 with 4,000 OTPC
Ladies: Rs. 3,000 with 3,000 OTPC
Couple: Rs. 7,000 with 7,000 OTPC

th February 2020

Weekday Package (Monday to Thursday)
Rs 4500 per adult with 3500 OTPC. (Age: 21+)

Weekend Package (Friday to Sunday)
Rs 5500 per adult with 4500 OTPC. (Age: 21+)

Inclusions:
Multi-cuisine buffet dinner | Unlimited house brand drinks (alcoholic and non-alcoholic) | Live entertainment | Taxes | T&C apply*

Call : +91 98196 98196

Dress Code
— Dress Code: Formals or Smart casuals. Shorts, sleeveless T-shirts, flip-flops and chappals are not permitted. Right to admission is reserved with the management.

OTPC Terms
— OTPC is for One Time Use only, and can be played on non commission live games which offer even payments (1to1)
— OTPC cannot be played on opposite betting areas simultaneously.

For example – Simultaneous bets on Red & Black/Even & Odd in Roulette.
— OTPC cannot be played on Slot Machines, Poker and Indian Flush (Teen Patti).
— OTPC can only be played once & regardless of the outcome of the game, will be taken by the dealer except when it is Push or Tie on relevant games.
— OTPC are non cashable.
— OTPC will be in denominations of Rs. 500 & cannot be broken down into lower denominations.
— Please check with gaming staff with regard to the limitations of usage before placing your bet.
— Games that OTPC can be played on
— Blackjack – Not Valid on Insurance/ Pair Bets.
— Money Wheel – Only on ‘1to1’ bets.
— Casino War – Only on the initial bet.
— MaangPatta – Only on ‘Andhar’
— 7Up 7Down – Only on ‘7Up’.
— Baccarat – Not Valid on optional bets.
— Roulette – Only on ‘Even Chances’ like 1-18, 19-36, RED, BLACK, EVEN and ODD.

MPC Terms — MPC is for One Time Use only, and can be played on non commission live games which offer even payments (1to1).
— MPC have to be played along with an equivalent amount in cash chips.
— MPC cannot be played on opposite betting areas simultaneously.

For example – Simultaneous bets on Red & Black/Even & Odd in Roulette.
— MPC cannot be played on Slot Machines, Poker and Indian Flush (Teen Patti).
— MPC can only be played once & regardless of the outcome of the game, will be taken by the dealer except when it is Push or Tie on relevant games.
— MPC are non cashable.
— MPC will be in denominations of Rs. 500 & cannot be broken down into lower denominations.
— Please check with gaming staff with regard to the limitations of usage before placing your bet.
— Games that MPC can be played on
— Blackjack – Not Valid on Insurance/ Pair Bets.
— Money Wheel – Only on ‘1to1’ bets.
— Casino War – Only on the initial bet.
— MaangPatta – Only on ‘Andhar’
— 7Up 7Down – Only on ‘7Up’.
— Baccarat – Not Valid on optional bets.
— Roulette – Only on ‘Even Chances’ like 1-18, 19-36, RED, BLACK, EVEN and ODD

General Terms
— Kids’ Special subject to availability
— A group consists of a minimum of 20 guests. Service charge will be applicable for groups consisting of over 50 guests.
— Dinner will be served from 8:30 pm. Alcoholic drinks will be served: 7:00 pm — 1:00 am. After 1:00 am, drinks will be served only on gaming tables (provided he/she is playing).
— The rates are subject to change without any prior notice.
— Please note that a valid government photo ID should be carried for verification before getting onboard. The passport is a must for all international guests coming to Deltin Royale and they will have to furnish the same upon request.
— Safeguarding of baggage would incur extra charges

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